By see you in the next post coment if you like posts like this and I will do a Me and my Dad.
Wednesday, August 25, 2021
Part 3 in lockdown
HI I am back and on the 19th I did a story could Me and my Mum. It has 144 words in it. I can show you it today. Sorry I did not publish it on the day I rote it.
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Great work Eilidh, I really enjoyed reading your story about you and your mum. You and your mum's dyed hair sounds like a rainbow, and I like that your background and the heading reflects this with the use of many colours. It would be great to see photos :)
ReplyDeleteIt would be interesting to see your next post being about you and your dad, then in the future one about you and your brother.
I'm excited to watch your blog grow and see what other activities you choose to post about.
hi miss Bargent thank you for you feedback. But me and my Mum didn't take photos I don't think. Im have not made a me and my Dad or a me and my Brother yet I am wating for me and my brother to do sothing amazing to hapen.
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ps Me and the whole class miss you.
Hi Eilidh, I love your piece of writing but wish I could see a photo of you and your mums amazing hair colours. It's so great that you recognise how hard your mum works. What other exciting things have you been up to?
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Hi mrs Hobbs I have not really been doing that much amazing stuf this year apart from going on my first girl guiding camp.
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Great post, I think you should do a "Me and my Dad" :D
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