Hello again I do not like it in lockdown . I did write a poem with my brother Emmett it is called Super hero and it has a background that my brother chose. As well as he chose the background he told me what to write is kind of long I will show you it.
Hope you liked it I will tell my brothe Emmett if you do like it by see you in the next post
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Well done Eilidh, I really enjoyed reading your Superhero poem. The repetition you and your brother wrote throughout the poem was great, and kept me wanting to read.
ReplyDeleteThe Incredibles and Batman are both great examples of crime-fighting heroes. Great use of onomatopoeia by using pow during your poem.
Do you and your brother think the colours used in the backgrounds relate to superheroes or are there other colours that work as well? I'm interested to watch your blog and see what other activities you choose to complete.