At school we wrote a poem all about us . On the first line we had written about our personality. On our second line in the poem we had to say the way we treat others all around us. At the second to last line it was things we like to do at home.On the last line it some stuff about me
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Brilliant Eilidh, you are now officially a blogger! Your DLO is very eye-catching, I really like the coloured title against the blue background. The words you have selected for your poem describe you perfectly. I will keep an eye out to see what you blog next.
ReplyDeleteHello Eilidh, This poem really is amazing, and I also like the colour's on the back. And if you do not mind me asking How long did this take to make?
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